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KenezeiFTW Totally Awesome
Posts : 131 Join date : 2012-02-03 Age : 26 Location : OnionLand
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| Subject: Ari, the Warrior Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:59 am | |
| SO, heres my new character. Took my time, but dilligaf? Mmk Ari was once the captain of an army for Trieal, a distant country, owned only by humans. She lead them through The Battle of Blieage (pronounced blay-juh). She was born under a long family line that had a reputation for battle skills. She doesn't care much for you unless you know how to use a sword, and that means being able to parry a giant crab while reading a book. She absolutley despises mages, and anything of that matter. She was born on the 18th of Stuirntag (random month i made up xD) as all her family members were auspiciously born in the month of Stuirntag. As she grew to the age of 13, her father one day led her to the feilds. There 4 scarecrows with wooden sheilds, iron swords, and buckets on their heads. Ari thought it simple when she saw a mage cast a spell on the, uttering the words, "had hor suf" (read it backwards ). The dummies then came to life, being real opponents. She fought, sweating and breathing hard but eventually she defeated her opponents. She shot her fathers cheif mage a dirty look, then left. By the time she hit the age of 18, Ari had left Dasrinf (her home town :3) to find a place to settle for herself. As she traveled, her passion for fighting only grew stronger. Finally she realised she wouldn't be able to just settle down. So she took to the seas, soon becoming a renowned sailor. She had travelled fair before she found the capital of Trieal. Their she was conscripted into the army, as a nurse. She didn't mind though. She bided her time, eventually causing the Imperial Officer to snap and challenge here. She won of course. 5 years later, the Emperor personally addressed Ari to promote her to captain. He told her that there was no higher honour than being a captain for the Trieal Army. Soon after the Battle of Blieage she left the army. She went back to the seas, eventually found Asgradia, where she traveled to Blue Moon Village. She has far to travel, but can see Blue Moon Village on the horizon. YOU LIKE? OMg probs the best thing I've written yet | |
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forcehub Totally Awesome
Posts : 186 Join date : 2012-02-03 Age : 25 Location : Vietnam
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| Subject: :L Thu Mar 01, 2012 12:51 pm | |
| Shall I destroy you for hating me , a Geo Master ? :L | |
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KenezeiFTW Totally Awesome
Posts : 131 Join date : 2012-02-03 Age : 26 Location : OnionLand
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| Subject: . Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:42 pm | |
| Hey, can't help it if a warrior doesn't like a mage..Ari hatse mages, but she'll put up with them. For a while at least. :I | |
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xTanukeX Admin
Posts : 138 Join date : 2012-02-02 Age : 26 Location : Australia
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| Subject: RAWRZ Fri Mar 02, 2012 7:08 am | |
| If chu can put up with mages, you will probably be welcomed, but if you hate mages at least 3 people weel keel chu :3 | |
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vouq Admin
Posts : 48 Join date : 2012-02-11 Age : 28 Location : S England
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| Subject: Re: Ari, the Warrior Sat Mar 03, 2012 10:29 am | |
| there are a few spelling mistakes, what I did was write my things on a notepad, check it with a spell check then post it. on the whole though, I looks really good Just sort of glad I'm not a mage of such I just have an orb of fire from the void | |
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forcehub Totally Awesome
Posts : 186 Join date : 2012-02-03 Age : 25 Location : Vietnam
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| Subject: >:O Sat Mar 03, 2012 12:53 pm | |
| hm..... Shall I still destroy her if she doesn't show any liking towards mages ? Or shall I forgive her if she kisses my hands xD ( LOL GIRLISH) xD ! | |
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forcehub Totally Awesome
Posts : 186 Join date : 2012-02-03 Age : 25 Location : Vietnam
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| Subject: uhm .. aren't we special ? Sun Mar 04, 2012 3:17 am | |
| Title ? We are the survivors from the "Incident" . I figured that we could be special people with special classes and abilities. Well Geo masters are special as well as Chronomancers ! But Warrior and Assain .. not so much ! How about Titan Slayer ? Or Shadow Void ( uhm void asssasins xD ) Or Omega Lyvan ? Im intending to make as many accs as I can when Static comes out cuz I love playing multi + unique classes BTW : Uhm should we use the set skill thing ? Like example : -i'd perfrom * on you now- * is the set manuever , a set manuever is a skill with allows u to only do wat the description of the manuever says . Ex : Dark Spear : Darkness binds your spear as you deal 5 fast consecutive hits to your enemy and -i'd perform Dark Spear on you now- => I can only do wat dark spear's description say : deal 5 fast consecutive hits to ur foe . Should we use that system ? And BTw 2 : should we have job advancement like : Bushido => Samurai => Shogun geomancer => Geo Master => Geo Lord Chronomancer => Chronomaker ( xD ) => Time Traveller => Chrono Corruptor => Chaotic Time Traveller ? ( u can choose any advancement from the 2 , that's wat ^ means xD ) 3rd advancement is extremely hard 1% of completing so that not all noobds can say : I'm a shogun , I KILL 1 hit - kills- u die haha I god I own I demand to make this my pla groud and u r meh toeys and blah blah blah xD should we have that as well ? And when u reach 2nd advancement , u can freely use ur abilities and u needn't use set skills U like ? | |
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xTanukeX Admin
Posts : 138 Join date : 2012-02-02 Age : 26 Location : Australia
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| Subject: Sun Mar 04, 2012 3:59 am | |
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xTanukeX Admin
Posts : 138 Join date : 2012-02-02 Age : 26 Location : Australia
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| Subject: Chrono system Sun Mar 04, 2012 4:22 am | |
| Time Changer => Chronomancer => Chronomaster => Chronos(achievable only through godly intervention, otherwise, go to next level) => Time Lord
(Above list is for good chronomancers)
Time Changer => Chaotic Chronomancer => Time Lord of Darkness
(Takes 10 years to gain next rank in the above list,which is the evil list) | |
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forcehub Totally Awesome
Posts : 186 Join date : 2012-02-03 Age : 25 Location : Vietnam
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| Subject: :D Sun Mar 04, 2012 4:37 am | |
| yup Job advancement and set skills RULE xD !!! I thing we should have professions to Like Cooking , Smithing , Alchemy , potion making ,.... In order to learn how to use a class , u must first learn the required professions Like : Geomancer : u need Geology , Element Studies , Planting xD ! xD This is a gud idea too , u like ? BTW : Job advancement update I think we should put related classes into 1 category , making a group For example , I made this group Nature group ( still thinking of a name for it , temporaryly calling it nature group ) : Apprentice => geomancer => * Geo Master => Geo Lord ( LOl 1% cuz u have to defeat others to become a lord , a 1 time only opportunity) => Earth Avatar ( bacsically , a god of the earth element xD , only availiable geo lord and u have proven Capricornus that u are worth it through a questline ) = > Druid => * Master Druid => Spirit Druid => Spirit Druid King => Archer => * Ranger => Sniper => Marksman * => from that advancement forward , u can use ur abilities freely and u needn't use set skills u guys like it ? | |
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KenezeiFTW Totally Awesome
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forcehub Totally Awesome
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| Subject: We r busy :() Sun Mar 04, 2012 5:23 am | |
| Ari title ^ ! I've got exams coming , Elyk got skyrim and harpy is busy too ! So we all argeed that we will all onl when Static ( the new blah ) is open ! Hope u understand ari | |
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KenezeiFTW Totally Awesome
Posts : 131 Join date : 2012-02-03 Age : 26 Location : OnionLand
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| Subject: -_- Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:45 am | |
| Elyk is finished skyrim...and we met up 2day and also noble isn't busy, and they aren't getting on T_T | |
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forcehub Totally Awesome
Posts : 186 Join date : 2012-02-03 Age : 25 Location : Vietnam
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| Subject: So ... Sun Mar 04, 2012 8:04 am | |
| So ya guys are hanging on Habplus nao ? I'd love to join but I got exams CURSE U VIETNAM's EDUCATING Group thing >:O !!!! CURSE U MONTHLY TEST CURSE U Final EXAM >:O CURSE U LITERATURE >:O !!!! But dun worry Im sure that I'll be joining u guys after next week cuz by that Time immma be shuffling in meh room all day xD And BTW u like meh ideas ? | |
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KenezeiFTW Totally Awesome
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| Subject: 0-0 Sun Mar 04, 2012 8:50 am | |
| uh no..we r hanging out irl :K and sometimes rping on habplus | |
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forcehub Totally Awesome
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| Subject: Re: Ari, the Warrior Sun Mar 04, 2012 9:00 am | |
| 2 shay ( LOL I dunno how to spell that :L ) LOL! anyway Like I said im not free until the next weekend so ... BTW u like the ideas I suggested ? | |
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KenezeiFTW Totally Awesome
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| Subject: l Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:53 am | |
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forcehub Totally Awesome
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| Subject: :D Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:55 am | |
| LOL I was thinking , Ari The Titan Slayer ? xD | |
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vouq Admin
Posts : 48 Join date : 2012-02-11 Age : 28 Location : S England
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| Subject: Re: Ari, the Warrior Sun Mar 04, 2012 5:05 pm | |
| I would be on habplus if my accounts didn't keep getting erased! | |
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